http://kitchen-appliances-pro.com/2009/03/23/what-do-you-think-of-my-addition-to-my-book/ Kitchen-Appliances-Pro.com Mon, 21 May 2012 22:27:01 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5 http://kitchen-appliances-pro.com/2009/03/23/what-do-you-think-of-my-addition-to-my-book/#comment-1637 Lynci Tue, 30 Nov 1999 00:00:00 +0000 http://answers.yahoo.com/question/?qid=20090319131530AAuY09L#comment-1637 There are numerous errors in what you’ve posted, particularly there is a dearth of punctuation. If you are asking the question because your aspiration is to have your story published ultimately, you will first need to learn to write more maturely and with originality and polish. Your vampire subject matter is quite overused recently; since the immense popularity of the “Twilight” series, teenagers by the dozens are writing vampire stories. And, of course, those attempts do not compare favorably with Stephenie Meyer’s stories. You should be careful using the term muggles as it was coined by J. K. Rowling. If you are writing solely for your own amusement, then I’d advise you to continue; completing your novel will be excellent experience for you. Afterward, try to have it critiqued by someone who is competent and objective who might be willing to assist you in the editing and correcting processes. Good luck. There are numerous errors in what you’ve posted, particularly there is a dearth of punctuation. If you are asking the question because your aspiration is to have your story published ultimately, you will first need to learn to write more maturely and with originality and polish. Your vampire subject matter is quite overused recently; since the immense popularity of the “Twilight” series, teenagers by the dozens are writing vampire stories. And, of course, those attempts do not compare favorably with Stephenie Meyer’s stories. You should be careful using the term muggles as it was coined by J. K. Rowling. If you are writing solely for your own amusement, then I’d advise you to continue; completing your novel will be excellent experience for you. Afterward, try to have it critiqued by someone who is competent and objective who might be willing to assist you in the editing and correcting processes. Good luck.

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