Once I got to my room I went to my bathroom and took a nice long soothing shower. The hot water on my skin was so soothing and relaxing. Once I got out of the shower I put on my favorite pair of silk pajamas it was a dark pink color. I began reading one of the books I had lying around. By the time I got to the fourth chapter Arthur telliported into my room. He startled me as always.“How many times have I told you not to do that Arthur.”
“I have no idea I have lost track”. He replied. “Now that’s not the reason I jumped into your room. I was just with Cedric and he just had a vision of you going to observe those muggles. How many times have we talked about this. Its too dangerous for you to go there.””I get where your coming from Arthur but its no big deal.””I don’t think you get it Enigma. There are just too many things you won’t understand now but once you get older you will.””Like you know everything. I don’t know if you have noticed this but you are only nineteen. You have only been of age for two years, and being of age doesn’t mean that you know every thing. So I think you’re the one that doesn’t get it.””You know what Enigma I don’t care what you do just don’t forget that I haven’t worn you.””Worn me about what. ”
He was gone by the time I finished my sentence.
Every time I would plan to go see those so called muggles Cedric would have vision about it, and Arthur would jump into my room and warn me about going. It was always the same the same argument, the same intensity.
Once I calmed down I decided to go to sleep and get ready for the next day.
It was still dawn by the time I got up. I could still hear my dad’s voice which meant that he hasn’t gone to work yet.
I got dressed and brushed my dark chocolate brown hair and let it fall down over my shoulders. I grabbed my black hiking bag and went down to the kitchen.
“Good morning.” I said.”Good morning sweet pea.” Charles my dad replied. “Where you off to so early.””She’s going to watch those muggles. Where else would she be going dad.” Arthur said.”Now Enigma how many times have we talked about this. Haven’t we agreed that you wouldn’t be going to watch those muggles any more isn’t that right Esmeralda.” Dad said.”I believe so Charles.” My mother replied.”No. You both decided on that not me. I don’t get the big deal about this. I don’t know why you guys don’t like them. Is it because they aren’t as gorgeous as we are, or is it because they are clumsy and we aren’t or because they make a lot of mistakes its not like we don’t.””You know what you can do what you want to do but don’t come begging us for help once something goes wrong.” Arthur said.”Come on guys calm down we don’t want to fight over silly things. How about we all sit down and have a good nice breakfast and then every one goes there own way.” Cedric said.”I’m okay with that if you are.” Arthur said.”No problem here.” I said.
It was the longest and quietist breakfast I have ever had. No one said a word. I have never felt so guilty. I know it may seem weird but I can’t not go. These people that every one keeps calling muggles are so intriguing. The way they talk and the way they go on with their daily lives having to struggle with every thing they do.
“Arthur honey can you go see who’s at the door.” Mom said.”Yeah sure what ever you say mom.”
He jumped to the door.”What the hell. What are you doing here. Aren’t you suppose to be hunting with the other vampires.””Oh nice to see you to Arthur. I love you’re enthusiasume.” Silver replied.
I jumped to my feet once I heard her voice. My best friend finally came back from hunting season.
“Silver I’ve missed you.” I said.
“I’ve missed you to”.
“You know you haven’t answered my question Silver. What are you doing here so early. Aren’t you also supposed to be supplying blood for the whole year. “”Aw you’re face still goes green when you say the word blood. The reason with why I am back early is that the number of animals have increased so we were able to get enough blood to last for the whole year”.”Ugh I think I am going to puke. How could you eat blood and enjoy it.””The same way you eat and enjoy food.””Come on enough bickering Silver we have to go.””Where. I just got here. I didn’t even get to say hi to your mom and dad yet.””They have to go to work so come on.”
I was so eager to get out of the house. I couldn’t stand another minute any more in that house. It was complete silence while Silver and I went to Dungeon forest. I was to wrapped up in what my dad, mom and brother said.
“What’s the matter you’ve been quiet the whole way. I thought you would be happy to see me.””Well I am Silver it’s just that we got into another argument about me going to Dungeon forest to go see them.””Oohh well they sort of do have a point Enigma we aren’t kids any more we shouldn’t be going there right now.””No you didn’t Silver you’re siding with them now. How could you.””No I a
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There are numerous errors in what you’ve posted, particularly there is a dearth of punctuation. If you are asking the question because your aspiration is to have your story published ultimately, you will first need to learn to write more maturely and with originality and polish. Your vampire subject matter is quite overused recently; since the immense popularity of the “Twilight” series, teenagers by the dozens are writing vampire stories. And, of course, those attempts do not compare favorably with Stephenie Meyer’s stories. You should be careful using the term muggles as it was coined by J. K. Rowling. If you are writing solely for your own amusement, then I’d advise you to continue; completing your novel will be excellent experience for you. Afterward, try to have it critiqued by someone who is competent and objective who might be willing to assist you in the editing and correcting processes. Good luck.